hetalia1533

Thank you for reading His Claims❤️

Thanks for the votes!!

I have posted the beginnings of the story I made that I finally edited but I think that I will put in another another thing. The story that I called is andromuda and is on the profile shacorra12. I hope you enjoy it.

What happened to your book ?

Thank you to all those who voted and commented.
          Really thank to all those who voted on the book create my own country.
          I hope once I finish editing those people could read it and tell me if I've improved and if it is better understandable.
          THANK YOU

The book create your own country will be retitled and edited. So I was wondering if you could tell me of any suggestions about the book that could make it better. Also could use help on a cover.  

Thx u for all the votes 

Preciate the votes!

AHHHH! Nobody has ever added my story to a reading list before, you are the first! Thank you so much!!!

Hey hetalia I'm Allure. Remember you asked me to review your book? You have to know I'm a nub too so... Yeah... 
          Well I read and all I can say is you have a healthy amount of imagination in my opinion. As your naruto story  wasn't completed I cannot say anything for sure but I can say the abrubtness of some events is very good but sometimes you need to drag out some things...like how the character is feeling about a particularly important event or the event itself for the reader to feel more in tune. I'll stop here with the review as I'm blabbering too much. :) 
          
          Anyhow over all your story was nice and everything else will come in time. All you have to do is read other fantastic books, write and complete your work even if you feel like you don't want to half way (I'm trying to do that too with my first story btw XD). Good luck...to the both of us. :)