heymfsitsem2004

WHO LISTENED TO TTPD ALREADY??!!!

heymfsitsem2004

@Aleria_Tagaryen ooh those are SO GOOD too! tbh florida!!! is getting so overhated which I don’t understand cause it’s way better than fortnight
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Aleria_Tagaryen

@ heymfsitsem2004  My top three are: So long, London, Florida!!! and Who's afraid of little old me. 
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heymfsitsem2004

@Aleria_Tagaryen after listening to the album several times, I have to say my top three are: who’s afraid of little old me?, the smallest man who ever lived, and guilty as sin?:) what about you?
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heymfsitsem2004

WHO LISTENED TO TTPD ALREADY??!!!

heymfsitsem2004

@Aleria_Tagaryen ooh those are SO GOOD too! tbh florida!!! is getting so overhated which I don’t understand cause it’s way better than fortnight
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Aleria_Tagaryen

@ heymfsitsem2004  My top three are: So long, London, Florida!!! and Who's afraid of little old me. 
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heymfsitsem2004

@Aleria_Tagaryen after listening to the album several times, I have to say my top three are: who’s afraid of little old me?, the smallest man who ever lived, and guilty as sin?:) what about you?
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heymfsitsem2004

Okay guys, I just updated Chapter 1 of The Path of Roses. You may noticed that I've changed the first chapter a little bit. Let me know if you like this or you prefer the original version. (But plz actually tell me. I don't want to assume. I'd rather hear actual critism and feedback)

heymfsitsem2004

I'm going to post something new this weekend. Vote on what you would rather me post.
          Next chapter of The Path of Roses
          Or
          Two new poems for Desktop Disorder?

Sundancer16

Hey! Is this note private or public? I'm not sure how Wattpad works yet. I'm nervous to add my book here.

heymfsitsem2004

@Sundancer16 that is definitely weird. When I transferred my novel on wattpad from Google Docs, the words weren’t likethis. 
            And yes! Definitely transfer your story into sections, because if you publish your story as one big paragraph, it won’t attract many people and it can be hard to read. 
            1,600-2,000 words per chapter is good for Wattpad standards. And that’s cool I can’t wait to see your book cover.
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Sundancer16

@heymfsitsem2004 I have been editing the story because when I upload it from my Word document, for some reason thewordsarelikethis and I have to go through and add spaces which is taking hours upon hours instead of just being able to easily transfer my story here. Not sure why it is doing that. Maybe if I transferred it in sections that might help? Each chapter is about 1,600 to 2,000 words long. I have five chapters transferred so far out of 30 and it has taken me hours. I also designed the cover using AI and Canva. I'm pretty proud of it. What do you think? Are you able to see it or do I have to hit publish?
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heymfsitsem2004

@Sundancer16 oh okay. Well try your best to find or come up with something to make your story the best version possible. For example brainstorming is a great way to boost creativity and get the rhythm going
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heymfsitsem2004

Hey guys! Check out the new chapters I posted of The Path of Roses . I’ve also posted a poetry book I’m writing called, “to whom it may concern” (tho i am thinking about changing the name title) suggestions are permitted and as always, i would love to talk to you guys:)

heymfsitsem2004

Hey guys! 
          
          Are you guys ready for Part 2? I hope you are, because I will be posting PART 2: Chapter Twelve at 7:45pm (Pacific time)
          Plz, plz comment down your opinions and critque of my story. I really appreciate and value all forms of comments of The Path of Roses.
          
          Thank you so much!