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Heyyyy fam
          
          So, remember the story I asked you for feedback on? I got the results back today and I GOT 5TH PLACE OUT OF 600 ENTRIES. 
          
          Thank you for the advice and feedback you gave me that day!! I am so, so grateful for it. I haven't watched Miraculous but I'm going to read your other books now as a thank you for what you've done for me:) 

Hello  I was wondering if you would mind reading my short 1400 story and give me some feedback (preferably constructive) on it? Only if you had the time, it's fine if not. 

Just a weird story that nobody is liely gonna read but wanted to share somewhere 'cause I have no friends ~
          
          So my mum has been sick for a few weeks and has had these hacking coughs (like, SUPER loud), and this morning I woke up to a quiet house, got up, and on my way to the bathroom I heard her cough from her room. So then I was like "Okay so I'm not home alone better not start singing super loud then".
          
          I go about my business, shower and have my breakfast, but then I hear the doorbell ring. I assume it's my step-dad coming home after dropping my brother off at college (he has a broken knee so he can't get the train) but when I go and open the door it's my step-dad and my mum.
          
          I have no idea who I heard cough, but I swear down I had NO doubt that she was home and just lying in bed to catch up on some zzz.
          
          So yeah, weird.

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