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Hey author! How are you?
          I am fan of your stories. They are amazing and keeps me so engaged into it.
          My favorite is "Beyond the Threshold".
          Recently I completed reading corrupt files. It was so good. All along i was thrilled and found it very interesting. The night in London when he says wife was my moment of "ek dum se waqt badaldiya, jazbaat badaldiye".
          
          { But in 40th chapter, the climax some how made me unsettle. As you already mentioned not to expect happy ending, i was prepared for it but i felt killing ajay just like that simply would not give justice to her mom's death right, all his deeds must comeout, the people who voted him equally as sana must get to know his reality.
          
          may be like, sana win with big margin, she revealing evidence publicly via media or something with help of sid etc.
          
          Then if happy ending is needed then ajay suicide - which might not be suitable bcs as per his character he will take revenge so it can be like he comes to kill sidnaaz(like sana has come to ajay place to kill him) and all the scene same as how you kept the fight and the gunshot, death of all three. }
          
          All this is in my opinion, just wanted to share. Everything else is absolutely fantastic, I read all your stories, started reading sangam, excited for further.
          
          All the best!! Always with you
          
          --your fan
          (hearts and smileys)

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Sure!!! I have read all other stories of yours as well, they are fab, among all beyond the threshold is my favorite and I loved sid's characterization in piya ghar aayenge specifically in the scene where he makes his mother understand in saree issue, also conveys the same to naaz, the balance he maintained over there just took my heart.
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hidden000author

@Symbol_16 Heyy! 
            I’m so happy to see your comment — seriously, it made my day! Knowing that you’ve read Beyond the Threshold, Corrupt Files, and now Sangam means so much to me  Thank you for being here since so long!
            
            To be honest, when I first started writing Corrupt Files, I had a completely different plot in mind. But while writing, the story itself took me in another direction — so I changed a lot of things midway. What you felt about the climax is actually not uncommon; even I felt that same thing after rereading it. I had already posted it and many people had read it, so I didn’t change it later. Honestly, I wrote the climax a bit hastily too 
            
            But I really loved how beautifully you expressed your thoughts. This is exactly the kind of reader I always wished for — someone who connects deeply and helps me grow as a writer  I genuinely felt so good reading your words.
            
            I hope you enjoy Sangam as well! And do try my other stories — I’m sure you’ll love them too. You can also follow me on Instagram (link’s in my bio) so we can connect there as well
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