hiddendl1

Looking for someone to be my proofreader. I want someone who knows story structure and character development. Preferably a woman who is an Age Regressor or is a Caregiver for an Age Regressor. As this story follows women, and I am not a woman, I want the female perspective. What did I get right, what needs to change? Is it respectful, will it appeal to women as well as men?

hiddendl1

Looking for someone to be my proofreader. I want someone who knows story structure and character development. Preferably a woman who is an Age Regressor or is a Caregiver for an Age Regressor. As this story follows women, and I am not a woman, I want the female perspective. What did I get right, what needs to change? Is it respectful, will it appeal to women as well as men?