hiddenseven

@Fluttershy2142 
          	It is a great book just needs a ending to the story and I understand I have school work too :)

hiddenseven

Thank you! It was amazing and I stayed up till four in the morning reading it. I loved the different personalities of each character and can’t wait for more in the next book to The Year Package. The death of Rebecca was totally unexpected and Stephan being Conrad was an even bigger shock. When Rebecca died, I thought ‘ok, and next chapter Conrad finds her just in time to save her’ only to find out that Conrad was the one to kill her. Most authors try to bring characters back to life to make a plot twist but you seem to make those just fine on you own. I also liked that there wasn’t any instant love in your book and that Mae didn’t like Dominic for a good portion of the book. I kind of wished we say more of the different personalities that Mae played but I understand that we can’t know everything and I loved what we did get, especially the scene with Lincoln just because it was completely different from Luna. 
          I absolutely loved the fact that I had to pause and thing about what a character was and where we saw or heard their name before because that makes it a good book to me. Having a good amount of character that I forget them but I can still remember after another sentence or two.
          Can’t wait for the next book!

lau_matthews

Hey there! I just wanted to send a quick thank you for reading my books! I hope you enjoyed them and I'd be interested in hearing any thoughts you had while reading. Thanks for adding them to your reading lists, have a great day! xoxo Laurea

KaraCarreira

Hey! Thanks so much for adding A Sprinkle of Stardust to your fantasy reading list! I hope you enjoy it :))

KaraCarreira

@hiddenseven I'm glad you found it interesting! Since I had a word count to stick to, there were some things I had to keep short (like the crystal memory cave).  I do hope to revise this book soon and flesh out some parts. Thank you so much for reading! :)
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hiddenseven

A Sprinkle of Stardust was quite the interesting book. A world not too different from ours and yet it kept us wondering of secret possibilities. I didn’t expect for the King to be possessed or for him to not suspect that she was the one trying to poison him at the beginning. I did wish for more of the crystal-memory cave but I understand that somethings are never fully explained. I hope you write more interesting books in the future. Good Luck! :)
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carolannewrites

Hi CJ. Thanks for adding TANGOFISH to your reading library.  I hope you enjoy Tango's journey.

hiddenseven

I really did enjoy TANGOFISH although I’m still not sure how I feel about Nate. I mean, everything he said made him the good guy but there were parts that make me think he is Skittles dealer and that he is a bad person. I liked the concept of handling grief your book contained. I could really feel Tangos emotions at some points and this make the story really interesting to me. Keep up the great work!
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maxd01

I'm rather curious, why do you have a list called Skip and add my story to it?

hiddenseven

The list Skip is for books that while reading I lost interest. This is so I know which books I was in the middle of if I were to have a renewed interest in the story in the future. I liked the plot of your story at the point but I wasn’t used to the continuous changing of perspectives. I put it off for when I feel more open to it instead of pushing though it only to hate it for that.
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BetweenProjects

Thank you for adding A Woman's Best Friend to your reading list. I hope you'll enjoy the read.

BetweenProjects

@hiddenseven I'm sure I'll figure it out.
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hiddenseven

@BetweenProjects sometimes its better that way or you could make something change drastically ( in Abel himself or around him) to make him play by the plot - p.s. sorry if this is late and wakes you up
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BetweenProjects

@hiddenseven wow thank you! Must admit I'm a bit stuck on Second Best. Abel isn't playing by the plot I have sketched up and I have no idea how to make him behave...
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