highshawmila

hey guys, i just wanted to know if you have any suggestions about quarantined? it can be anything, character development, story development, the writing or how things are described, the size of the chapters.. anything at all? please give me your opinions, they're really important to me ❤

whyfeelittwice

i think maybe you can make a chapter in shawn's pov and see how it goes, it'll be interesting to be with both sides and how they're dealing with things 
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highshawmila

@TraceyHembling spoiler alert: i already something that in mind when i started to write  thank you for your suggestion ❤
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TraceyLeeCavanagh

@usedtolua Yes I agree with @WritingShawmila, definitely they need to be able to be together.  Maybe something happens in one of their apartments and they accidentally interact so then the other invites them to come and stay?  And enjoying the start of the flirty conversations so definitely ramp that up!  Really enjoying it! xx
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MindSoulDance

Just wanted to say that i absolutely love your writing. Your writing skills are incredible and I simply adore the details and the way you describe them. Also the way you delineate their feelings... You have us all hooked♥️ 

highshawmila

@MindSoulDance this truly means so so much to me!!! thank you with all my heart, im really happy you're enjoying ❤
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highshawmila

hey guys, i just wanted to know if you have any suggestions about quarantined? it can be anything, character development, story development, the writing or how things are described, the size of the chapters.. anything at all? please give me your opinions, they're really important to me ❤

whyfeelittwice

i think maybe you can make a chapter in shawn's pov and see how it goes, it'll be interesting to be with both sides and how they're dealing with things 
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highshawmila

@TraceyHembling spoiler alert: i already something that in mind when i started to write  thank you for your suggestion ❤
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TraceyLeeCavanagh

@usedtolua Yes I agree with @WritingShawmila, definitely they need to be able to be together.  Maybe something happens in one of their apartments and they accidentally interact so then the other invites them to come and stay?  And enjoying the start of the flirty conversations so definitely ramp that up!  Really enjoying it! xx
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