I just wanted to tell you that Rose is a masterpiece. I hate the fact that Niall is always hurt but I really, really love that feeling. It's what keeps me going. I really hope Niall will get better soon. I don't care if someone is forcing Harry to do and say all of those things to Niall but Niall should definitely move on from him and start a new life and be happy. It's what he deserves after all:')
And if it's okay with you, maybe you could use more punctuation marks to make the story easier to read.