Hi! Thank you so much for reading my story. It really means a lot to me, especially coming from another writer.
I'm still learning myself, so I don't think I'm the best person to give advice, but I can share what usually helps me. And I hope this helps you too !
The biggest thing I recommend is storytelling. For storytelling, you need a deep imagination. I think you already have that, since you're also a writer. As you keep writing, your storytelling naturally becomes better.
For my own writing, I usually write the story first. Then I use AI, such as ChatGPT, to help me correct grammar and improve sentence flow. If you don't want to use AI, there are also grammar-checking apps that can help. And main thing is you shouldn't always depend on ai. Make sure to read your story for full check up too or for more corrections!
I also try to use words and sentences that make the story feel like a novel, while keeping them simple enough for readers to understand. I don't want the language to become so complicated that readers lose the meaning.
Most importantly, I think characters, emotions, and the world itself are what make readers remember a story.
I hope this helps, and I wish you the best with your writing!
Remember Consistently is also the key!
