i unpublished cherry chapstick. i have spent the past few months trying to find a direction for the story to go, but i couldn't manage to gather up much of anything.
jake is just not a good protagonist. he doesn't know what he wants and just kind of lets things happen to him. he is more of a supporting character than anything. Zach, i feel has a much better chance at being a protagonist. He has an attainable goal; self-acceptance and liberation. If I were to write a book surrounding them, I think Zach would be a better narrator or protagonist and I could get my message across.
Now, this is kind of long, but I think I may sort of either re-write trapped, give it new characters and make it less romance centered to make a bit more sense. Or, I might make a different story with Asmodeus, with a much better plan.
Honestly, k I might just keep writing my one-shots cause they make me happy.