Hey, I really enjoy reading your stuff, very poetic. I saw that you struggle with some grammar. I could help you out if you want to. It's just an offer I don't mean for it to sound rude :)
Heyyo girl, take this reminder,
The world needs you. Because in this broken world we destroy, but some people also create. Art and music and books. And you write, you create, the world needs you :)