ShadyXPerry

Thank you so much for commenting on my story!!!
          You really made my day!!!!
          Xoxo

ShadyXPerry

@ShadyXPerry I know... Thanks again..
            I'm really really really sooooooooooooooo happy that you love my writing!!!!
            
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himynameiskehlani

@ShadyXPerry Aw no worries hun. I really love your writing and just a fair warning I'm a vocal reader, so I will be giving my opinion on the characters every now and then. Just be sure to keep in mind that none of my feelings towards a character is aimed towards you as a writer...k...keep up the great work hun<33
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SaraJackson727

Hi, hope you having a great day! In His Mistress everyone is okay if Angel divorce him then Alesserndor get everything from her n her dad! Now it other way around everyone hating on  Angel! Yes it was a marriage contract and he should of honor it instead of treating her like dirt then have her sign his contract! He knew from beginning he was going treat her bad! All his anger should of went toward Hazel not Angel but instead like Angel he still wanted Hazel who cheat n didn't love him but his money! If you look at it in some ways they are alike! It's not call revenge it call karma not once you see Angel doing him dirty but you bash her!

himynameiskehlani

Hun, take a breather. I was not, by any means necessary trying to bash Angel nor was I trying to shed some negativity on Nicholas either. I was merely saying that based on my understanding, Angel has always been such a kind and loving person. If she were to go along with her dad's plan and use revenge as a sort of coping mechanism due to Alessandro's infidelity...then imagine how much that could impact her internally & externally-and would stooping down to such a low point make her any better than Alessandro. I personally feel that it's important to empathize with each and every character regardless of whether or not we agree with their actions or not. Taking EVERYTHING away from a person and hoping they live a life full of misery is in fact revenge. Karma works her magic on her own and isn't intentional. Nicholas is intentionally going out of his way to ruin Alessandro's life. I'm not saying this makes him a bad guy, but more so trying to say that revenge is simply NOT the answer. Please keep in mind that I am NOT by any means trying to justify Alessandro's actions when really I am just trying to say that revenge is something that can turn people for the worst especially situations like this revolved around Angel and Alessandro. I really hope this comment and the ones before didn't offend you in any way, whatsoever. Cheers hun 
            
            -Kehlani @SaraJackson727
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