@hirokasuzu like you are reading fanfiction... wait for it sometimes fanfiction reads like fanfiction are we being so fr rn... and not to mention the fact that often fanfic reads so clumsily bc it's being written by KIDS. LITERAL KIDS.
anyway moral of the story... waiter waiter my lobster tastes like lobster
@hirokasuzu one thing i always say is people shouldn’t expect shakespeare level writing out of fanfic writers. they’re not published authors and aren’t professionals. the whole point of fanfic is to have fun. if a fanfic writer wants their writing to be better than they will put in that effort but most people just do it for fun there’s no need to be rude about it. if you don’t like the way someone writes just don’t read it.