hiroshiiumi

Updated chapter 1 slightly

I will write a short authors note. I want explain the characters, especially onee san’s feelings a bit more

Final part is published

Also how does this ranking system even work? I am 266 on emotional ranks. That’s pretty cool but 265 has 120k reads. It’s quite interesting.

rereading this story again and again, I only feel like I have shat on it. The story doesn’t come out like I want it to. Ughh. For now I will at least finish it but I will come back to it one day. I have so many ideas for it but I know if I had made the story any longer it would have become confusing as hell. Also the quality of it would have not been up to the mark. Well anyways part 3 will be out in a few hours.

posted second part. I wrote it in 1 hour. But I think I did a better job. At least I’m happy. Next part will probably be the last one. I had seriously thought of so many possibilities for their meeting. They bump into each other in the city or she is dying and he finds her in a hospital. Now I liked this one best

posted first part. It’s my first time writing and I can see it clearly. I can’t express what I want in words. It’s very frustrating. I have the picture in my mind but the words won’t come. I’ll get better next time.