Your story is very good! It's better than most fetish kink stories. Miles and Kayleigh's relationship, though not perfect, is a much healthier relationship than other kink wattpad couples. One thing I would say is to maybe back off the sex a little bit to where they aren't having intercourse every single day. As dark as this story is, it has emotion. The scene where Taylor is giving Miles a blow and Kayleigh is watching as punishment is *chef's kiss* and it felt as more of a sad moment for Kayleigh then a kinky moment if that makes sense. The aftermath is very sweet and also has an impact. Every fetish story I read usually has a very toxic relationship and it's refreshing to find a good story! I hope you'll update soon!