hisprivate

hi guys

itsnotzaahhh

Heyyy<3
          
          I'm writing a new book called promises, im kind of new to this writting thing and I've only posted a few chapters soo would you take a look at my book and tell me is it's somethings missing or if I need to add anything to it and how you feel about my writing if it's terrible could you please tell me what I should to to improve it as I really enjoyed writting the few chapters and I really enjoyed writting it... So if you do have the time would you please check it out
          
          and if you did like the book can you vote on all the chapters
          
          and can you also follow me I'll also follow you back
          
          Thanks for your time loveee<3

hisprivate

@itsnotzaahhh ILL TAKE A LOOKKK
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dearestpaige

Hi!!! I’m looking for some feedback on the book I just posted. I saw you read a LOT of stuff and thought maybe you’d like my writing! Let me know :)!

dearestpaige

love how intimidating that response was and then you left like 10 comments lmao. thank you for checking it out!! really appreciate it :)
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hisprivate

@dearestpaige lets find out if i do or not
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mia-booklover_123

https://www.wattpad.com/story/359306693?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=alyarirri22&wp_originator=Q%2FJFCKJ5sdhwhkYGmhsWfcD61DAuPz4uL9yNdmhOO9ekbKtkGCoAF4tYgVbrDq6k1uOG7EMxdcdh0H834UeCquzyKaalpOleqRCvlNZo1ab6tyTnVfz5DocRHjuHnFFt

hisprivate

@alyarirri22 ILL READ IT TOMMOROW WHEN ILL HAVE TIME
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StarryyNightmare

Hello there,
          If you are into mature and romantic story about an arranged marriage then check out my book called His Loving Eyes. I promise it won’t disappoint.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/98586682?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=StarryyNightmare&wp_originator=CAQIei0%2Fl7GJnha7ht47nZrwIgxyfmbjIXM2OnW9xZaIDjTN36OSThCkiBmTDeqan7NODHGDK6fQMkblDVj3tdRK17k2eTnh434X2iqMcbLebhVu8Yt1EaV6duys5DEP

hisprivate

@StarryyNightmare thanks, def finna read it rn cause ive been looking for a good book to read
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CLHarper

Hey! Sorry for barging in on your wall like this but I saw your library and thought you might be interested in my work. It's a completed dark romance, with all chapters edited (so if you see any errors, please point them out) called The Cunning, here's a quick synopsis: 
          
          She's as clever as the Devil and twice as pretty.
          
          Madison has a secret, and she wants to keep it that way. Her days are short and simple, she works her shifts at the 24-hour convenience store and goes home to feed her neighbours cat. It's peaceful, quiet.
          
          No one is any the wiser about who she is and what she's capable of. 
          
          Because if they did, Jase would never have accepted the money to take her. He wouldn't have instructed his boys to follow her home and stake out her house. They wouldn't have tied her wrists and told her to accept her fate.  
          
          Because if they knew who she was, they would know it meant sealing theirs. 
          
          When the request for Madison was made, Jase assumed it would be like taking candy from a baby. Instead, he learned the hard way that holding her captive was the worst mistake he could make.
          
          Madison has fewer tears to cry than most and she doesn't suffer fools gladly, so when the panic stops, the game begins. Being raised by a morally grey man has taught her a thing or two about morally grey men. 
          
          Jase has a secret and he wants to keep it that way- he let Madison go once before. And she won't let him forget it.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/231837723-the-cunning
          
          If it sounds like it's something you'd enjoy, please check it out and thanks for reading my message, have a good day :)

CLHarper

THANK YOU SO MUCH! And if you have any constructive criticisms or you stop reading halfway through bc it wasn’t for you, please point them out or tell me why so I can work at improving my stories <3
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CLHarper

@hisprivate thank you so much <3 I really hope you like it :)
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hisprivate

@CourtneyLHansen ILL DEF CHECK IT OUT IT SOUNDS RLLY GOOD
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