Thank you so much for the vote! I really hope you enjoy the read and I look forward to any advice or critique you would offer.
I love to read this genre ;)
@SorrowfulQuill thank you soo much for that valuable feedback, as I'm only new and do not have a method to writing, I just have the ideas and then have had to learn to write ;)
@SorrowfulQuill Breaking up long chapters into shorter ones helps! I also notices that if you start off with shorter chapters, and then let them slowly get longer as you go works too. Since you have already caught the readers attention and have gained their interest!