hmzepher

Sure, I can take a look..
          	I you want you can send it to my email, hayleycornelius@rocketmail.com 
          	Let me know what kind of feedback you're looking for.

maggieb2409

Hi,
          I am currently on the first draft of my story Dragon Meld which I foolishly uploaded to Wattpad. The story lacks life and I was wondering whether it was possible for you to help me inject excitement and energy into the story.
          I would really appreciate the help and am very thick skinned, so brutal honesty would be considered a blessing.
          Regards Marg.
          P.S.
          I spotted your message yesterday and have spent this morning desperately hunting for it again. Although there are many offers of assistance on-line, I only want to work with the best which is why I was so pleased to re-locate your message.