@Staaxine heheh... many things!!
i was dissatisfied with the writing style in general. i wanted to fix up characterization especially with minho— i wanted him to be more clearly and consistently isolated. i also wanted to hint a little more at what's wrong with minho from the start, showing his family dynamics a bit. plus there were some concepts that were never really fleshed out all the way. and to be honest one of the biggest reasons is just the fact that I hated chapter 9 lmaooo