Idk if you got my reply to your comment, so I'll post itagain here:
I'll check out your story when I get some free time :). Atm, I have to write a 20 pg short story for my Eng creative writing class :o.
As for Viky, she has auburn hair, and big blue eyes (avg height & weight). She' not very strong/lean (yet). She has a heart-shaped face, and a narrow chin, high cheek bones, and full lips. Etnicity (1/2 Irish-Amer. on her dad's side, & 1/2 Russian, from her mother's side). Hope that helps creat a better visual for you ;)
<3Rach