@hoedontplaywitme
Not me going through your reading list immediately after seeing the note
My apologies for sliding into your Conversations board uninvited.
I just wanted to grab your attention to my stories. There is an arranged marriage story, a teen romance, a young adult, and some mafia stories.
Once again, I'm sorry for intruding.
Have a nice day ahead!!!
https://www.wattpad.com/story/239672415-mafia-miss-honey
Hii friend
I need a favour
Will you please read my story "drowning girl " and tell me if I need any improvement.
I am in real need of some suggestions so that I can continue.
Thank you.
also using published or popular books as a guide may help, especially on the basics.
it has a good plot but it does need some work. your spacing, sentence patterns, explanations and descriptions need some work. when you write monologues try spacing it out and drawing out your character’s emotions. also when you write descriptions and explanations prolong them to keep the readers interested. hold off on telling everything about the things that happen and what your characters think so readers stay eager to read.
I fucking love that pfp and your previous username was just love ❤
I'M LOVING THAT PFP(‘◉⌓◉’)
Thanks for listing Mountain! <3 sorry it wasn’t good and too short for you.