hollypaws

Alright! I've edited up to chapter five in my redo of Different and Proud! Should I publish it yet? Please leave your thoughts below! 

hollypaws

Yo it's up!
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hollypaws

SoOoOoOoOoOoOoOo
          
          i'm redoing different and proud
          
          
          
          z
          
          
          completely
          
          but dONT WORRY
          
          I'm leaving the old version up until I finish the new one. All the characters will be the same, I just want to make the story better :) I think the small details *cough* leafclaw obsessing over one thing all the time *cough* could be better, and I just want to critique it. :) 
          
          tHe rEASON
          That i'm leaving the old one up
          is that I rEALLY want constructive criticism on it so I can take it into consideration for the new one. Thanks guys!! <3

hollypaws

and im also renaming Flameclaw
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hollypaws

EDIT: I'm redoing the prologue.
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emberblazeofwindclan

Hello, there! I read your book as requested, and feel it is quite good. There are, however, some grammar errors and whatnot that I'd be glad to point out if you'd like me too, but in general the story was quite heartwarming ❤
          
          (One thing, though, what the heck is shoutout for shoutout? If it's just giving books a shoutout, I might make some fanart and tag you lol)

hollypaws

Okie dokie! Ty for reading btw! ☺️
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emberblazeofwindclan

@emberblazeofwindclan probably Blossom, my other books suck lol. You don't need to worry about grammar, though, since that'll be fixed in the e-book. Just plotholes, I guess :)
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hollypaws

Ah sure! And tysm! Which book would you like me to read? Also, I am 100% happy to receive comments to correct my mistakes, go ahead! Thanks again! ❤️❤️
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