@Sashawrtzz
Thank you so much for your honest review, honeybee. I truly appreciate it.
I completely agree with your point about the smut. The reason I included it is because I saw readers enjoying similar content in other books set in the 1900s. I thought I’d try something new and even asked a few readers they said it was good. But honestly, even I feel uncomfortable sometimes while writing those parts. So, I’ve decided to replace the scenes by use a cute nickname or symbolic term for those areas moments instead.maybe in some places you will find those words but I have to add them because the timeline and realistic so...
You might also notice some cursing or bold language here and there, but that’s part of the raw and realistic tone I’m trying to reflect for that timeline. I’m showing things as they were with all the flaws and intensity of that era.
Also, if you’ve read Chapter 3, please let me know your thoughts! I don’t really have any reader friends who point out my mistakes, so your feedback means a lot. And don't leave my book because ik you will love the storylinr Thank you once again for supporting me and helping me grow as a writer.