Hey dude I know your only 11 so this is pretty good for an 11 year old but for the future and if you ever update this again my advice is that this book moves along really fast, too fast. The character is at one place then in one sentence it's somewhere else. I think u should decide more on a story line and add descriptive details
Sorry if this is somewhat hurtful I just want to give you advice because u might have potential Good luck