Hope

@gabbyartist101 nice 
          
          And yeah you're doing really well. Just basic editing stuff. 

@impossibilism no probs. I really like it so far. 

@pirouettestomcr haha I've been told. I hope you like them. Btw nice username 

Aliza told me to read your stories.

Thank you so much for the follow!

@xrayz1209 I liked Marjory more as the end of the book approached. I think it would be a great idea and that if you want to, you should write it. Don't worry about any negativity on your characters…those people don't matter. As for having too many stories going on, I guess you could wait before you write it? Idk. Do whatever feels right. 

@xxstoptryingxx cuz people are àssholes. Don't let them get to you. I love your work and so do many other people. If you ever need someone to talk to direct message me. It'll be ok. They're probably just some awful writers who like to bash others because they're jealous of you or something like that. Don't take it personally and don't take any of your books down because of them. They just have big mouths and cruel hearts 

OK, edited version of Chapter One up. I think it's better. You tell me. Its around 5,150 words long, lots of editing, lots of effort. Hopefully y'all like it. Don't be afraid to comment what you think, and votes are greatly appreciated.

@xxstoptryingxx what's the name? 

@xrayz1209 hehe thanks