horror lover!

Plz check my horror novel
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/281754370?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=hlongwanezethembiso&wp_originator=9pKqKqR%2FGGgB1ObKRN%2BIRaIr7fJCwdJr05AbfxlHaQWGWFtSntTP65Bmka22Wv%2BOjIDcl6c%2BUXo5YYTmWXwAPDjjOJuCTpp5h3YipO%2BMS7xzCMEkIOWV1cZT6vHN2vfi

Hi!!! I have just started writing my first book... It would be great if you can have a look and give me some feedback!!!
          https://my.w.tt/UiNb/tps2X3ZYCI