horserideraja

@yuffieproductions nono! i totally understand, i find myself having the same issues! im just glad that you didnt think i was crazy.
          	
          	i suggest creating another personality/consciousness and whenever you need to write a story just pull it out and sha-bam! instant made character.

YuffieProductions

Thanks for the comment! No, I completely agree with you. All my protagonists have pretty much the same voice.... I'm really going to work on that and making all of them different. I guess I just write the way I think, so they all end up being pretty much the same thing. 

YuffieProductions

Thanks for the comment! Glad you like the new cover. I'm very happy with it. Much more relevant and eye-catching than the motorcycle one. 
          
          Yeah, Jara is their "shipping" (ie. couple) name used by fans.
          
          :P Nope, they're done. Jared's too smart and responsible to go against reasoning like what Shaun said. But keep reading and see what happens. ^__^ 

horserideraja

no no, i understood it, but i had to think on it for a moment, maybe if you say that it was a punishment for stealing it would clarify it? unless you want it to be implied, then its perfect =D
          
          and thanks for the review by the way, im just looking at it now XD

YuffieProductions

Thanks for the comment! Yeah that pinky park was supposed to imply that Kairi had stolen something in the past and gotten her fingers chopped off (like in the olden days, thieves would get their hand cut off). Was it too vague of a reference? Someone else read it and got it, though.