Hey. You are a really good writer. I love writing and I have a few projects. I have part of one called Sunrise and I'm starting one called Nightmare Rises that one isn't posted yet. I still have to type it up, but could you check out sunrise for now. I would really appreciate any critisism. I love writing and I try to get better every day. Thanks if you consider reading. And again. You have a true talent in writing.