Okay! Im doing a whole new start to this story, but i am keeping the main plot and most of the dialogue. Besides that, Im looking over the story to see if anything doesnt make sense or doesnt fit. Please comment what doesnt make sense so i can edit it! https://www.wattpad.com/story/70616081
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