houseofrome

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OshaiSilva

Could you critique my story? So far I’ve only written 2 chapters and I’m wondering if its worth going forward with it. You seem like a very good writer, could you tell me what you think?

houseofrome

Just read both chapters and you definitely have something going on here, the cliff hanger at the end of the first chapter was perfect. The way you make the fast food employee’s anxiety/ angst pop off the page is really well done. Keep it up for sure! 
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houseofrome

Thanks for the compliment, it’s much appreciated. Of course, I’ll definitely check out your book and tell you what I think. 
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OshaiSilva

The book name is “The Haunted Shift”
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