howellaboutphan21

HELP WANTED: i would like someone to criticize my writing!!!!! NOT hate, like "omg this is trash," but more like "this part is great, but you could add/delete this part or fix this."
          	see the difference? okay thanks!!! 

howellaboutphan21

@bananabooties sure! if you want you can check out my books/chapters when they coke out, and PM me if you find something to fix :P
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howellaboutphan21

HELP WANTED: i would like someone to criticize my writing!!!!! NOT hate, like "omg this is trash," but more like "this part is great, but you could add/delete this part or fix this."
          see the difference? okay thanks!!! 

howellaboutphan21

@bananabooties sure! if you want you can check out my books/chapters when they coke out, and PM me if you find something to fix :P
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