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Hey guys! Sorry that I haven't been on in so long... I am going to be moving to Quotev @ quotev.com so go check me out! I have started a couple new books too so there's a lot to see plus its a wonderful community to be apart of. Go check me out at the username @TheArtsAtHeart or follow this link https://www.quotev.com/TheArtsAtHeart I hope to see you guys there!

http_Nyltiac_com

So sorry for not updating my books in a long time. I just recently made a move all the way to the other side of the US where my home from was and I still don't have wifi at my house plus I now have a job that takes up a lot of my time. But I just got this site unblocked from my schools wifi so as I get time to write, I can finally start updating some.

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I need some help, from any writer, I have a sentence that I really like, but it doesn't flow, can you guys check it out for me and maybe give me an idea? 
          "Five hours passed, with a breeze, when we finally got done."
          It's talking about a guy who is helping a new guy who just moved in next door move into his house.