huanserlynagurl

read my new story "Rest In Peace"

Rosescar684Gismo

I volunteer as tribute.
          
          There is no winners there is only survivors.

Rosescar684Gismo

so far so tragic
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huanserlynagurl

A/N Hey guys! It's my birthday today and (July 7) and I want to tell you why I can't update that often these past few days. It's actually because I've been  working on a book called "The Dance of The Dead" and here is a preview:   Cindy thinks she knows what really happened to Jacynda, the ballet legend, she thinks that she can reveal her big secret, she thinks she can steal MY spotlight, but she can't. Becuase fame is not handed to you on a silver platter, it is fought for, you have to fight and compete for fame, you have to avenge it. And I am here, at the Odette Academy of Ballet to avenge and fight back all that's been lost for me and my mother, because Cindy took EVERYTHING me and MY mother had! I am here to get revenge, and poor Cindy can't stop me. Why? Becuase dead girls can't move or talk. - The Red Ballerina. So if you liked the story goooooo check it out I already published nine chapters. https://www.wattpad.com/story/100672370

NameIsTooShort

Hey! Remember the story of deppression I made? Well, since you really seemed to like it, I re-made it! If you would like to, you could come check it out! Thanks!

NameIsTooShort

@ NameIsTooShort  Oh my thank you so much! Another story will soon be on his way! 
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huanserlynagurl

Sure, so I read it and I have to say, ur writing style has improved, dramatically. Right now ur story has more detail, and description, it's also more fun to read, the plot is more detailed. What I suggest to u is to edit some more, and keep on updating, I luv ur story! I am totally in to ur story, so keep writing!
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NameIsTooShort

@huanserlynagurl Oh god aha thank you so much!  but..it was really noobie writing style but I'm glad you liked it! Now it's a bit more dramatic but I would love to hear your opinion! 
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huanserlynagurl

:( :( :( oh NOOOOO!!!!! Abby Lee is getting replaced by CHERYL BURKE!!!!!! noooo I mean I don't hate the players I hate the game meaning that I don't dislike Abby, Cheryl, the girls, or the moms I just don't like the Producers!!!!! I hope the producers know what they did becuase they REALLY pissed me off!!!!! I hope they know that Dance Moms - Abby + Cheryl = Dropped Views and Pissed off fans! X( I really am going to reconsider wacthing dance moms again!:( PRODUCERS JUST LOOK WHAT A HUGE MESS YOU MADE!!!!!!!!!! Just becuase you and Abby had a little tussle, does NOT mean you replace her becuase of that! I think the producers actually don't give Abby any credit and hates her independdnt and #swag adittude plus that she's a strong woman  seriousely, ITS FREAKING CALLED "Abby Lee Dance Company/ ALDC" whats Abby Lee dance company WITHOUT Abby Lee? huh? I really do think that the producers are somewhat SEXIST!!!!! again this is only my opinion and I really do hope I don't hurt any ones fellings for saying this. I am in a very fagile state right now, becuase I am upset about this and am deeply concorned about Dance Moms and ALDC's future. Bye  luv ya guys!