Occult-sky

I am just a new author , I am requesting you only to Plz read my work one time ..and give a review ,
          I even messaged you coz your genre is even fantasy and magic related and that's what I am best at ..I hope you will like my story , but please don't forget to give it a glance " The Melancholy of Death"  although I have just published it's two parts only But to continue I need some positive reviews from strangers .I hope you will understand