hunnidaze

@artbySSx  of court id love to

hoawls

Heey, Mad! I just uploaded a new story, it's called "God, Weed & Classical Music" and I would really appreciate it if you could perhaps check it out and comment your thoughts? It's a teen fiction so I believe it'll be to your taste. Thank you in advance, have a great day(:

hunnidaze

Aw yea for sure (:
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hunnidaze

Just a little feed back since I just read all of the chapters I suggest a few things
          1) try to slow down the book it seems like everything is going a bit too fast 
          2) use some more description and dialogue 
          3) try making the chapters longer bc all 6 chapters you have can easily be put into 2 with more descriptions