Hi there! Thank you for following! It's a great pleasure. - - -
I really like your story, "Tell Her You Love Her." It is actually the first time I'm reading about a character like Cole. Like how he doesn't come off as the "bad boy" but in a "hi I'm different." Yeah it is true that most "bad boy" characters are different or more like "hey there is more to me.." but with Cole .. he is somewhat unique. He gives off a very friendly vibe you know? At the same time, as a reader I am "feel" the boundary that he has put up between him and Kelsey. And at the same time, Cole is not the "direct" kind of character. Like for example, usually as readers we would be able to tell when a character is head over heels for another one. As for this story, I can't read Cole's mind nor feelings. I mean, sure he might be interested but it leaves more of like a "gap." And that is good because your future chapters will fill in that gap. AND WE WILL ALL BE HAPPY! Okay. :D Sorry for the long message.
