Hey Aurora,
I really liked your story, the whole idea of it seems really different. I'm guessing this is more of a romance/comedy genre, am I right? I thought it was wonderful. I am looking forward to reading more of your stories.
Oh, I would like it if you could read mine as well? It's all up to you.
Thanks =)
ps: I personally felt that Brian's POV was cute, the whole stomach fluttering thing lol