can you please check out the beginnings of my story "behind the mask"? i'm kind of a nweb writer and it would mean a lot. thanks ^_^.
"I made my way through the crowds of dashingly dressed lords and ladies to the main room. Chandeliers glistened on the ceiling, their sharp, pure crystal points swirling daintily in the soft spring-chill breeze. Between the chandeliers and the armed, trigger-happy gunman lined against every inch of the walls I didn’t know which to run from first if things didn’t go as planned. Either way, life didn’t seem like something I’d leave here with."
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