hypertrixdark

So a new story is here called "Slime Adventure and Helping the True Dragon Problem." I know Wattpad notifications are not working right now, but see if this reaches people.

DownBadOtaku

@hypertrixdark The theater one sounds interesting, It would be funny to see Velgrynd's & Velzard's reaction to them becoming a weeb like Weeb-dora lol. Also having the 3 primordial demoness' in a harem together with Rimuru would be great, there is barely any stories that focuses on them with him, the only one I have ever read was 'Bonds through Worlds' (I think that is the name). Its centered around Testarossa mostly with some others in Rimuru's harem, I recommend it (Has some LEMON in it, just a heads up).
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hypertrixdark

@DownBadOtaku I am glad you like it. The series may end up with another Au where everyone can react in a movie theater to Rimuru's parents and watch Rimuru's adventures. But that in the future maybe this year fall or next year winter. But once I do it I think I might try to reduce some aspects of the story and balance it. Also, the ships I wanted all three Primordial to be with Rimuru. I might try again with that new story in the future and see everyone's reaction of him getting 3 demon girl. I want test the story I working on if I can handle a harem. Right now it 5  girl in Rimuru ship. But I might go back to 7 girl on the new one story In the future.
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DownBadOtaku

@hypertrixdark Have to say I was unsure of having the 3 true dragons as parents, but now I can confidently say 'I LOVE IT!'. Can't wait for more, the silliness and interaction are hilarious! Keep it up!
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Josheyer

I'm really loving your alt-timeline Rimuru x Shizu fanfic! I have one problem, though—I'm not sure, but it seems like you're making it on a phone and have some limits with grammar correction. I'm willing to be your editor and proofreader if you're willing. I just thought I'd say this since I really like it.

Johnbulder

If you gonna give the slime unique skill dimension weapon , tank and aircraft maybe give a limit like:
           -you need more magicule or time to summon it
          -aircraft can summon 1 time but after it get destroy make it a cooldown so it cannot spam and maybe can summon pistol it can defend itself(slime flying the jet and that summon the aircraft)
          -tank pro and con(like longer summon time or need more magicule to summon it) depend on what version(light,medium, heavy) if summon a big walker or big tank maybe need multiple slime to summon it and time to summon is longer
          -weapon your original idea
          For headcase if you still gonna give him the skill after Rimuru evolve into a demon lord maybe make it size smaller ,longer time, and big magicule to summon but after it get destroy,he cannot fight back because of the magicule to summon it but can only use skill that use little magicule 
          Just a idea to you if you want to add to the slime adventure and helping true dragon problem

m7mmdalomairini

hey I have request

m7mmdalomairini

aw i was always want obera to be his girlfriend 
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hypertrixdark

@m7mmdalomairini I see, so it's the same as demon summon. Also, about your early question about making Obera his girlfriend. If you're talking about Rimuru, I have to say no. I don't want any more girls with him. But I could make her fall in love with one of the slimes. Like Rex or Cody since both of them look like Rimuru and Shizue. Or I could make her fall in love with Charybdis's/Valera/Velera Rimuru's sister, whom I am adding 2 or 3 chapters later...
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Johnbulder

Maybe you can make a reaction story like @Maximusitis react to That time i got reincarnated as e dragonoid slime but for slime adventure and helping true dragon problem reaction 
          This just a idea

Gaurav200

@hypertrixdark yh it was a good reaction i like it very much
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hypertrixdark

@Johnbulder That does sound like a good idea. I mean, I did. “That time my wife and daughter from another timeline got a second chance,” which made theater room for another. I did "Two lovers who lost everything. Rimuru and Shizu reacted to Rimuru's timeline." I could do same and reacted to "Slime adventures and help the true dragon problem." But you do realize I have put a lot of people in the theater react room, right? Maybe not right now but maybe in the future, like maybe in the fall or next year's winter. I have too many story's I want to write. Thank you for the suggestion. I will think about this idea more in the future...
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Rodikoda

I have got a question.
          It's about Gobta, what do you think of him ?
          Do you think is he more or less pervert than Mineta ?

Rodikoda

@hypertrixdark Thanks.
            If possible, could you please tell me what do you think of it ?
            PS, sorry for late reply.
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hypertrixdark

@Rodikoda noted I try read it when I have the time...
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Rodikoda

@hypertrixdark i will send the two parts for you to read, i hope you like them.
            Just in case you really do it, this future they would react is the future who await Gobta.
            PART 1 : https://1drv.ms/w/c/4CD8A2E613E1E01D/ER3g4RPmotgggEzOEwAAAAABk6xpG9O09pyLMnk5KHnWxg?e=rIaB59
            PART 2 : https://1drv.ms/w/c/4CD8A2E613E1E01D/ER3g4RPmotgggEzOEwAAAAABk6xpG9O09pyLMnk5KHnWxg?e=ZxWbMD
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allaroundcrafterzi19

I'm back with more ideas! Also I hope I'm not being a pest with this....
          
          Luminous visits Veldora to make sure he's okay but to basically take advantage of the fact he's sealed to tease the crap out of him using whatever clothing she could get her hands on. (Cause this is Luminous Valentine we're talking about and we all know she'd do this in the name of messing with her husband) In fact, one of the main reasons why he takes uses his dragon form more is because it doesn't (physically) have a reaction to her teasing. He tries to get her to be careful in case a random adventurer pops in or his sisters suddenly remembered they had a brother and decided to visit. Which they never do to his disappointment and Luminous's rising anger. It also solidifies Luminous's hostility towards the two, more to Velzard than Velgrynd.
          
          Also, is it okay if you make them a bit stronger than in cannon them since, let's face it, the partners of the True Dragons are absolute monsters out of all of their kind and there's no way Luminous would let herself lose to them when it comes to that. She also has Asmodeus for obvious reasons (Veldora dying to his Velzard who kills him despite him no longer rampaging much for stupid reasons. The pain of feeling him die via Soul Corridor. Waiting YEARS for him to regain his lost memories etc) even though it really doesn't work on him, to her despair but Veldora promised he wouldn't die much which he kept till his sealing.
          
          Veldora also is more of a dad to Rimuru than a brother in comparison to cannon since unlike his counterpart, he actually WANTED to have kids and TRIED with Luminous (even bought and made clothes and toys for the baby) but the constant failures hurt until Rimuru existed and he focused in being a dad to him.

allaroundcrafterzi19

You can do it man! I believe in you! (Also I'll draw any of the scenes that I find interesting and I'll tell you when I do cause I'm an artist)
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allaroundcrafterzi19

I won't get to use these anyway, since I already have a fic I'm working on!
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allaroundcrafterzi19

Like I said, I'm pretty patient, take your time playing around with the ideas, heck do what you want with these I don't mind. I practically MADE the ideas for the sake of you using them after you said you'll make it into a fic anyway so don't worry about anything and take your time!
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