pakeko

Can u give a try to my book and suggest me some ideas or tell me if the concept is good?
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/340154727?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=SummerCharlton&wp_originator=9b3WMGtCyrM8POse3auGeuVtMRzlpa47K9WTRjblMz7wo%2FxXb7PXaCoK17naRF8zHV6FjUJWtLEmRhydMgTas52GVMLOCx3ioC3Wd8TMe%2FuCn4GtG4h5Mcyk9C%2Bklmwd