PLEASE can ppl slime out my writing (or yk give constructive criticism cuz im kind of a bum)

not much to slime out tho cuz ive only written like one chapter and i prolly wont write more since im unmotivated as fuck

deadass tho how do writers on here be updating everyday where on earth are you finding the time and motivation to be doing allat

i stan like 2 groups and thats straykids (bias hyunjin its kinda obvious im kinda disgustingly obsessed with him hes so hot wtf??) and babymonster (bias pharita cuz shes so tea) 

i luv my dad and daddy and sugar daddy and baby daddy hyunjin

and pharita is suchhhh a baddie mother always mothers idc come at me shes a QUEEN (my queen back off im gonna pop a dookie on her)

i dont think anyone cares about shi im saying but i like saying stuff. i dont even know what im saying half the time but i be talking just to talk cuz its fun. 

btw im a fucking freak as u can tell by my username so if ur an immature sensitive fat fuk thats gonna come at me for getting a lil dirty with papa hyunjin, ur srsly so boring and shud get a better sense of humor. and what r u gonna do about it, tell hyunjin im being a baddddd girl? cuz trust me he already knows DAMN WELL how BAD i am with him. if u be yapping on about "ohhh sexualizing idols is disgusting!" first of all IM NOT IM JUST WEIRD and second of all IF UR GONNA REPORT THIS SHIT TO BANGCHAN MAKE SURE TO TELL HIM THAT I THINK HIS CHILDREN ARE FUCKING SEXY AS SHIT!!!

ok bye bye im saying too much even for me!

oh wait i forgot i also love I.N because idk wth hes been on recently but he must be FUCKING OVULATING TO LOOK THAT MAJESTIC. my king is ASCENDING YEAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!