Hiya there! welcome to mah profile :D im gonna try to post stories so pllzzz give me ur honest opinion! unless its just plain mean, then tht, u can cover up a bit lolz

if u have a chance plz take into conisideration reading: Closer Distances! 

i need to improve my writting skill more and learn how (and the patience) to write a full length book with long chapters. instead i think my style of writting may be possibly more of short chapters (like james patterson's books) and maybe novelas.