iCeCoLDplus

Well, I know nobody is really reading these, but I'll keep posting said stories, following more people, etc. I would really like feedback on what I write, so I know what needs to be improved on. The more critiques I get, hopefully the better I become.

Ok, so I finished writing a chapter for a new story I'm trying out. It'll be based loosely on my gameplay through Pokemon: Sun/Moon, which will have a new OC of mine narrating, but I'll have all the companions from the series appear, so ya. Once I find  a picture for the chapter, I will post it and would like some feedback please on what's missing(like if something isn't described fully, so I can add more in the next chapter or something!) Plus, if you want to appear in a chapter as a trainer who asks for a battle, then just comment on this post. However, if you want to be more of like a long-term rival, then comment below and I'll tell what all I need for that to happen, but I only want one, MAYBE two rival tops. Anyway I hope you guys enjoy the chapter once I publish it! It'll be today, don't worry!

I'm going to try writing more, hopefully releasing one chapter a week for each story hopefully. Might write my own original story too, so if you or anyone you know wants an oc included, friend or foe, just mention it and I can consider adding them into my stories! Plus how have you guys been?

I've been working on my Rune Factory story quite a bit and once I check them again to make sure I like them, I'll release three chapters, with an author entry!(author entries are just when I talk about how my story will unravel and add some insight on the past chapters). I'll work on my pokemon story next, brainstorm about two more stories, which are more game based ones, and try to rotate through all of them. Be patient please! :D

Hello friend how are you?