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uhhh....hi, i love ur profile this book is outtttt and give me an honest reviewww!!! i am writing this new book and i really need ur help to follow it up since no one ever does, its so sad cause the last one i wrote I dont think anyone liked it because they were just doing ingenuine read for read....i am not done with the first chapter, i just need u to check out what i have done and be VERY honest with me...pls i beg you, support me and help me since no one does ....this is the story, pls check it out. https://www.wattpad.com/story/404505518-his-favourite-maid-%E2%99%A1
@Kiam38888888 hiii, so I just read it, and here is my honest opinion. *BTW I'm also a beginner writer so don't take any of these too seriously lol. I really liked the plot you have going on here, but one thing I would say is that the pacing was a bit too fast for my liking. It seemed like Isaac already knew that Marcus was going to ask him to take care of his daughter, otherwise, why would he already have had the documents with him? And if he already knew, maybe we could get some background through flashbacks or something like that where he might say out his plan. Also, it would be great if we could see how close Isaac and Marcus were before the first scene, maybe in another flashback. If not it doesn't seem very responsive or convincing to us as the reader since we don't really know how close the two actually are. Maybe you could go that too. Overall this was really nice and I can't wait to see waht happens next. Just make sure to work on your pacing. Byeee
Your wattpad profile looks great and I would appreciate it if you would like to check out my book Naima if you’re interested.
Thanks for the follow and for adding Box of Stars to your reading list!
@iLuvReading2030 Oh, you have come to the right place! Most of my books involve trauma and drama.
Happy late birthday!! Have a great week ♥
