@rappuccino0696 rappuccino0696 the first chapter is great. It seems well thought out. Its not rushed. The details are great but there's not too many. Not many people have read it which is good because you don't have anyone rushing you to do another chapter.
Yo Melonies I am here to inform you that I am writing a new story
fan: again
me: yes
fan: but what about the other ones
me: I am still writing them I just can't get the story down on paper the way it is in my mind
fan: you should still finish the other ones
me: that is why I'm not posting this story till all the chapters are done. I will write the whole story then upload it all at once.
fan: this makes sense
me: thank you.