Hi, love so these are my suggestions. I hope I don’t come across as too critical because this is a really good book❤️.
1.Please include the character name of the character whose POV the chapter will be told from. We may sometimes miss the picture when binge-reading or reading offline.
2.Please stick to one dialogue format i.e “xxx,” she said or X:yyy. This makes it easier to read. Please also differentiate between the characters thoughts, their actions, and their speech by italicising and using punctuation for example.
3.Please only start new sentences on new lines when starting a new paragraph, with a slightly different main idea. Please also try to keep the translations beside, and clearly indicated by italics for example, the line being translated.
If there is more, I will definitely communicate it with you as the book progresses, but all in all, what an amazing read! Can’t wait for more❤️!
