iamamoose

@pewpewdieyouzxc I mean that every number under 100-like twenty, you can't put in literature like 20 it has to be spelled out like twenty, you made the mistake in your writing.

jasjasjaslyn

 alright :) thank you for the comment! I'll take note of that. I'll rewrite it I guess. I was probably too desperate to upload SOMETHING so this is a pretty slip-shot piece of crappy chapter. Thank you for the comment! :D 
          
          P.s. I deleted the chapter so I had to write here. Have a great day! :)