@cuteaisha25 bhai meri baat sunlo silent_nejiri was a good friend of mine here and i used to comment on her every chapter. I was the very first one to vote on those too. Since she started that book I've been there reading it and providing her with either ideas or somehow asking her to improve. Yes my comment was abrupt, I said sorry to her and she accepted it too. I know how to write very well and I was a supporter of her. That comment was to somehow irk her into changing the plot and I told her that too. She herself accepted it and also asked people like you to not message me about this coz I was a support. She will return soon and with a better plot and she already had a lot on her plate. She already was not able to focus on the story nor on her own life. She will return with a better story and I've been with her since she started fate go ask her.