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@Nosypoky Of course!! I was wondering if you would try reading the story I just published. It's not all that long and I would really love to hear what you think.

@presafresca Hey! you're welcome, and I hope you have a nice day too. I was wondering if you could take some time to read the short story that I just posted, and send me some feedback. It would mean a lot to me, and would help me get better. Either way have a lovely day.

@evening_rosaille thank you very much!

@evening_rosaille  Of course, no problem! I was wondering I you would take a little time out of your day to reading my short story that I just published and give me some feedback. It would mean a lot to me. If not have a great day anyway.

@sinha_m of course, I respect your work and I was wondering if you could take the time to read my first short story that I just posted. It would mean a lot to me and if you leave some feedback it would help me get much better. If not I hope you have a great day.

@BexzJade Of course no problem. I was hoping you could try reading my short story and give me some feedback. It's my first work and any criticism or feedback would help me improve my writing which would mean a lot. If not I hope you have a great day.