ianluisbernal

I'm so sorry I haven't posted in a while people. My sister accidentally erased my amazing new chapter and now I have to reimagine almost everything! So sorry, but please bare with me just for a while longer...

BornofLove

Hey, Wattpad won't let me comment on stories so I just wanted to let you know that I've read the first two chapters of your story and they're great. I only have one point and that is that mahogany furniture is REALLY expensive because of the tree it's taken from. You mentioned in the second chapter that the furniture in his parents room was mahogany. I'm not sure if you did it on purpose but normal furniture would be maple or oak and that's for good quality furniture. Otherwise it's a great start.

ianluisbernal

I'm glad you liked it. The mahogany thing was on purpose by the way. I had it all planned like it was part of a huge whole... But I haven't been able to publish it yet... School has been killing me, but I think some huge free time is coming up. You'll just have to wait and see... ;)
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